Finnian Burnett

Storyteller

Here’s a micro piece that was rejected from a fifty word story site. I mean, maybe it’s not as good as my story of the week fifty word story, Homecoming, but it’s not bad for fifty words 🙂

Unheard

I didn’t care when she talked about her dreams. I didn’t notice new haircuts or compliment her outfits, not once. I nodded without even putting down my newspaper while she prattled at breakfast. I never heard anything until she said, “I’m done.”

 I’m listening now but she’s no longer speaking.

One thought on “50 Word Story

  1. KimiSue Davis says:

    Oh wow! For a 50 word story, that was epic!

    Sent from my iPhone

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